Monday, 17 October 2016

new shoes gone in the mud

New shoes gone in the mud!




I was brand new shoe this HUMAN! Has left me in this
soul taking lace kicking mud ok i’ll CALM DOWN and tell  you the story. There I was sitting there with my brother day by day people going by the window until this handsome young man aka story writer he went in the store he brought me and my brother.



mud don don DON!

There I was at my new home handsome young man put me on eeewww his feet isn't as handsome feet. WOW! His feet smell like feet king kong or worse?. He run down this muddy yard then he jumps SPLAT! In the mud he takes  wow that was a real kick in the rear heal he take me to his mum and mum said um take those away they are to muddy take them away they were brand new! Handsome young man said to me bye bye he throw me into the mud
Me in the mud day by day

So how did you like that story I know mean right not left
So day by day sitting in the mud

The end by the  handsome young man called corbin bugler the best writer in the world            

4 comments:

  1. hi corbin this is a cool story. you could of made it more interesting but it still is interesting why did you pick this story why not another one
    Bye

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  2. hi corbin this is a cool story. you could of made it more interesting but it still is interesting why did you pick this story why not another one
    Bye

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  3. cool thanks bye

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  4. cool thanks bye

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