Wednesday, 15 March 2017

portrait poem


My hair is like a leprechauns pot of gold

My brain it thinks to stick as a pack so when we go hunting at Mcdonald's someone else can order  

My eyes are like marbles on a marble race  

My arms are so natural at dabbing

My heart is like gold because I’m awesome so I think

My teeth are like a wolf's they can bite through freshly cook steak

My ears are like elfs because they are so big so I think

My nose is like a dogs because it is so good I can smell my dad take off his work boots

My dad always told me if you don’t succeed at first you gotta pick yourself up and try and try again in other words never give up

2 comments:

  1. Great poem and I love the photo !!! Mum x

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  2. Hi Corbin!

    My name is Ellee and I will be blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning Journey!

    Your poem is hilarious, I really enjoyed reading it and I feel like I know you a little bit better now! ....I like that your arms are so natural at dabbing and your heart of gold!
    I also agree with your Mum, your photo is great!
    I am hoping that I will get to read some more fun and creative posts from you this summer!

    If you want to check out the Summer Learning Journey website you can copy the URL below:
    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/

    Hopefully I'll see you blogging over the summer soon!

    Ellee :)

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Thank-you for your positive, helpful, thoughtful comment.