Dear anty mavis I am currently in the hospital ship fearing for my life I have been hit by a piece of shrapnel in my lower left leg while trying to help a man who has now fallen. Im currently being treated by a nurse its silent until hearing a loud BANG ever body flinches and praying it's not aimed at us. While i'm getting treated im started thinking what if this was the end if I don't make it tell uncle I love him. Other than that the ship is unique because of its red crosses on the side. The ship is ginormous people in hospital beds people have no arms no legs I close my eyes in utter disbelief I glance over I see my good friend who I grew up with he had no arm I blacked out of fear. When I woke he was the one bringing in the patients relve at what had happened but he told me got a mortar at his trench he was in two rows back from no man's land. My life didn't feel like it had a purpose until nurse told me you can go home or go back out... My heart was telling me to go back and see you and uncle but brain said that I must fight for my country… my decision was to go back home thank you god for watching over me and thank you for sending me anzac biscuits thank you again I will see you soon love you Aunty Mavis.
Monday, 30 April 2018
Anzac postcard
Aunty Mavis address rock and roll ave phone number 123454669 from corbin
Dear anty mavis I am currently in the hospital ship fearing for my life I have been hit by a piece of shrapnel in my lower left leg while trying to help a man who has now fallen. Im currently being treated by a nurse its silent until hearing a loud BANG ever body flinches and praying it's not aimed at us. While i'm getting treated im started thinking what if this was the end if I don't make it tell uncle I love him. Other than that the ship is unique because of its red crosses on the side. The ship is ginormous people in hospital beds people have no arms no legs I close my eyes in utter disbelief I glance over I see my good friend who I grew up with he had no arm I blacked out of fear. When I woke he was the one bringing in the patients relve at what had happened but he told me got a mortar at his trench he was in two rows back from no man's land. My life didn't feel like it had a purpose until nurse told me you can go home or go back out... My heart was telling me to go back and see you and uncle but brain said that I must fight for my country… my decision was to go back home thank you god for watching over me and thank you for sending me anzac biscuits thank you again I will see you soon love you Aunty Mavis.
Dear anty mavis I am currently in the hospital ship fearing for my life I have been hit by a piece of shrapnel in my lower left leg while trying to help a man who has now fallen. Im currently being treated by a nurse its silent until hearing a loud BANG ever body flinches and praying it's not aimed at us. While i'm getting treated im started thinking what if this was the end if I don't make it tell uncle I love him. Other than that the ship is unique because of its red crosses on the side. The ship is ginormous people in hospital beds people have no arms no legs I close my eyes in utter disbelief I glance over I see my good friend who I grew up with he had no arm I blacked out of fear. When I woke he was the one bringing in the patients relve at what had happened but he told me got a mortar at his trench he was in two rows back from no man's land. My life didn't feel like it had a purpose until nurse told me you can go home or go back out... My heart was telling me to go back and see you and uncle but brain said that I must fight for my country… my decision was to go back home thank you god for watching over me and thank you for sending me anzac biscuits thank you again I will see you soon love you Aunty Mavis.
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Hi Corbin, my name is Manea and I am in room Waitemata at Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked how you used a New Zealand hospital and added an Anzac war twist to it. It made me think of when I went to Star Ship for one whole week and also when, my Mum told me about my grandpa who was a tank driver in World War 2. Maybe next time you could add some photos and some sound effects but, other than that, I really enjoyed it. If you would like to check out my blog, my blog is at https://wpsmaneaw.blogspot.co.nz/
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