Monday, 26 March 2018

metaphor poem


Corbin is a peanut butter sandwich get stuck on the inside of your mouth, it's annoying but is still good
Corbin  is a hoodie keeping people warm and looking

Corbin is a five dollar note because he's a helping hand

corbin is a hummer, strong on the outside but soft in the inside.  

corbin is a pine tree able be lots of things

1 comment:

  1. Hi! My name is Isra. I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like the interesting ideas that you wrote on your poem. It made me remember the metaphor that we did 3 weeks ago. If you want to see my blog write http:// wpsisra.blogpost.co.nz/

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Thank-you for your positive, helpful, thoughtful comment.